Fiction by David Detrich
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"Constellation wordsmith chromemetallic artform whorls of paint metamorphosizing into the spiritual being of light who bumps into the translucent silk of the ivory curves as if by chance...feeling the thrill of gender as the sex kitten transforms into the chromosonal pairs of words which become the dovelike form of the painter/poet... who comforts the supermodel with a warm hug as her eyes glitter with the precise calculations of the infinite suggested by the fortuitous encounter..." the deep breathing of fluidity inspires the serene couple to hold hands in a descent down the steps of life which appear in the informal prose of semantic structures... where the artist is giving finishing touches to the oil painted profile of the pin-striped gentleman in a green corduroy shirt... who notices the red garters above the sleek thighs of the translucent silk of ivory curves... "The Abstract Expressionist phrases of the innovative novel convey a cooing voice that whispers to the true spirit of a fortuitous likeness words which create the sensual excitations at the predictability of chance... as the hips of the fashionable model in flowered bikini bump lightly into the magical apparition of painterly form whose erect posture yields to the translucent protection of the golden foil..." while the topless mermaid admires the visuality of the prose written by the novelist... nombres whose chance composition appears as the creamy white space of the blank page curving into the soft light of the intimate space... where a fissure of light illuminates the crevice tufted with fur as the painterly forms ascend through the synchromy of abstract shapes in the color harmonies of desire... as the translucent silk of ivory curves kisses on a dream with the receptive wishes that inspire the foot fetish aperture of the narrative perspective while the procreative chapters of the innovative novel deep into the comforts of the soft light in a representation of fluidity...
within the Jim and Artie informal prose of the ultramodern design with the cunning of a magical spirit feels the high degree of desire peaking in the chance structure of the Surrealist text... with the body above in pink shades of the hollow rose petal surface with the space of the page before the blank whiteness of the moonlike breasts... which are soft sculpted by hands through the vanilla shades of the figurative drawing with a light sprinkle of moisture the erect form of the mechanistic form who is automated by the movable gestures of love... a retrospective of the magical spirit of the poetic avant garde in paleblue gray oceanic shades of rodeo designs with the rhythmic energies of the nightlife... the human body is written in expressions of Surreality which inspire thoughts on erotic filmmaking envisioned in the subjective consciousness of the phenomenal ... Georges Braque by Jean Leymarie published by the Guggenheim... grey circles lanced with Westgate 2013... nombres by Philippe Sollers this is to say that the description of a cube is ...
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Zettel represents my notes from reading the Tractatus Logico-Phiolosophicus by Ludwig Wittgenstein which has transformed the November landscape into the Surreality of atomic facts... Salvador Dali mentions the atomic facts in his exploration of the fourth dimension where the non-colored objects on the picture picture plane... sensibly * perceptible * sign/logic painting as the objective description of the subjective/metaphoric collage...
the sensuality of perception creates esthetic appreciation for the sharing with non-sensual perceivers... comprehending the text with appreciation in the sense of Husserl's Phenomenology... Dada delights in non-sense and the illogical as an expression of the irrational and of love.... lkdjfoihefoiuefoiubieufbibue...
the irrationality of humor is expressed in a smile... the mind has its limits... logic is merely objective... surreality favors the metaphor/mystical * semiotic * metafictional novel... lkjfdolijodihoifehiouhfeiuhiefuibi... the completely analyzed proposition: characters exist among objects... character A Andy Warhol exists meaning A = A...
or A does not equal A depending of relative position in space in relation to others... Einstein's theory of relativity applied to metafiction... the elucidation of primitive signs represents the Semiotic novel... lead with love... the word represents object... mental chaos from multiple unappreciative perspectives... won't clean up room...
heavy sceptical beams... the Tower of Babel defined as chaos with primitive men conversing... Zettel by Ludwig Wittgenstein with my lecture notes... reading The Wumberlog by John Lennon showing the development in style to A Spaniard in the Works... Boko Haram 2013 Abubakar Shekau bringing spirituality to the militant movement...
divinity student dressed in white... miltants losing as Arab culture gains... Agony by Arshile Gorky... the agony and the ecstasy... domineering and pinching the optic nerves... someone looking through the eyes of the novelist / mirrored figurative drawing with the freedom of poetic literary sentence structures... flowering fragrance puff of smoke... colorbursts fading diminish into memory... informal prose... pursed lips deep breathing orgasmic energies... the blur clarifies into the poetic words of Nathaniel Mackey which extend along the plotline from a Santa Cruz radio program to the moment of writing / the relationship with the romantic form in lingerie whose curves inspire the pipedream... photogenic * textflowers * hard object... the freedom of the poetic literary snowbank dusted streets... flowering fragrance puff of smoke... sweep the floor... flutter of wings waft the intellect * mindtrumpet * Miles Davis...
Aimé and Suzanne Cesaire have written the Surrealist text across the reflective waters of the Caribbean / gray white cloud formations hover above November apple tree branches like brush strokes of entropy... Coffee redraspberry * meta/chocolate tonalities of whipped cream brush strokes /self emerging from aromatic reflections of the prosaic... Lance Olsen
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Intelligent agents of the wild wild west Pop Art... sudden cloudburst of sunrise color as the abstract silkscreen persona known as Hook Paws & Champagne... an easy catch for marriage as the spontaneous deep presence... the remembrance of things past occurs as the November * snowdusted sunrise/golden intensity enumerates the equation... prolepsis: evoking in advance Gérard Genette analepsis; evoking earlier event anachrony: discordance of temporal order Indian tribes feature the papoose with a baby in a leather crib...
like the story of Moses... the Egyptian dynasty design of a bird with outstretched wings... Jacques Derrida considers the themes of ancient Canada... the modern literary press... Garry Thomas Morse reminiscent of the ancient Indian kings to 1200 AD... the Gin Blossoms as the spirit of romance... a tour of ancient world... Dancing under the laser lightshow stars as luminous points in the night sky... suns * planets wandering within the equilibrium of gravity... the naked eye perceives the Milky Way as the stylized stars of the Miro moon symbol silvery shape... the white textures of the performer computer persona constellations * configuration... Surrealist personality reminiscent of the film Robert Desnos poetics... Beat generation themes evolving from Henry Milller /the rebels sing their favorite song just like him: an eternity of donkey * lightwaves inspiration for the conceptual breeding grounds of the creative writing class where Kilowatts of electricity power the electric motor * electromagnetic fields for the radio broadcast... rockstar persona of constellations in a configuration of blonde textures dating the lightwaves in a description of the futuristic ideal celestial body / heavenly heroine * celebrity * superstar Starlight red scarlet * carmine wine red reddish cinammon cherry... King Crimson rose brick literary pink... drawn as a Lance Olsen portrait of light voiced narrative strategies... red hair Oriental rice refried beans Thanksgiving with algebraic equations as the snow crystals blow my mind... December his range of vision spans the scope of the compass sweeping the extent of the colorfield * deskorbit * cloudambiance on the horizon/horse latitudes... the mind has its limits bounds * confines parameters range of mountains peaks in a row... silver chain sierra ridge massive written lines strings series... variations * diversity smoking mixture a collection of memories... array of rice on the stove as pasturage for the prairie grasslands grazing on the land literary greensward... protests in Kiev, Bangkok, and Cairo 2013 as police brutalize and tear gas the peaceful crowds...let us disempower police throughout the world... the quartet is ready to perform after the lockdown... the Pop Art cartoon hero feels love for the translucent silk of ivory curves deep affection * fondness for the moments of tenderness warmth intimacy... an attachment of endearment revealing a literary devotion * noveladoration * idolization of the model text...
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"Love for fashion | | a love for the northern cuisine entitled the poorboy series with an appreciation for the Dry Creek zinfandel to taste the textures to delight in the synonym... The Pop Art cartoon hero feels love for the translucent silk of ivory curves deep affection * fondness for the moments of tenderness in the warmth of the winter intimacy... an attachment of endearment revealing a literary devotion * noveladoration * idolization of the model text...The Pop Art cartoon hero feels love for the translucent silk of ivory curves deep affection * fondness for the moments of tenderness in the warmth of the winter intimacy... an attachment of endearment revealing a literary devotion * noveladoration * idolization of the model text..."Love for fashion : : a love for the translucent silk of ivory curves bent with proclivity felt in the inclination of his desire positioned to reveal a predilection for her penchant earrings.... the northern cuisine entitled the poorboy series... to taste the textures to delight in the synonymous... an appetite enthusiasm * fondness for... a weakness... protests in Kiev, Bangkok, and Cairo 2013... let us defend the rights of the people to gather peacefully... the quartet is ready to perform after the lockdown... love for our fellow human beings... To feel compassion with a regard for the solicitude of the narrator / a concern for the philanthropy and benevolence of our fellow novelists who represent humanity as an expression of the innovative trends in fiction and the contemporary in lifestyle... "Whorls of tassels spurred by the novelist in cowboy shirt who admires the verbal artistry of the flowerchild appearing as a watercolor of yellow white /transparency that appears in a sketch of the Haight Ashbury afternoon sidewalk prowess by adding color to the mindvision * blondecollage * arttechniques that blend the cherry red western shirt with the water soluble cream colors of the model.""Gender / image / text the art of writing is the writing of art with transparent lettering on glass as you ponder the meaning of transparentia rose red intensity of saturated color in conjunction with Venus and the crescent moon above the apple tree in the photogenic clarity of the December winterscape / red hair shades of erotic comedy with red crimson lips and electric blue eye shadows an oil painted complex image that suggests a burlesque drama of expertise while the narrator admires the Frida Kahlo / Diego Rivera deftness in oils a virtuosity in mural painting a mastery of humanity in motion," the XXX sketch of young talent is a parody of the innovative novel with the plotline transforming into phallic silverchrome * starcharts * plot variables in a sequence of mini-erotic escapades that introduce new characters while appreciating the intuitive aptitude of the original lovers.
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"What is fiction but the realization of the creative process, sculpted and beautified, like the canvas of a painting, visualized scenes which form a tableau, as you chose words which will compose the novelistic space of your mindmap * noveloutline * time/evolving plot structure which forms a recurrent pattern of Matta three dimensional visualizations of intersecting dimensions occuring on the space of the page, a whiteness that is a snowdrift of emotional clarity, a perfect artform for the expression, written or drawn, like a dance of the photogenic model across the pages of the monumental novel in a two volume expression of love by the literary artist for the reader / subject of the composition to appreciate?" the novelist conveys the the esthetic theory of fiction, a lifetime of events in a timelapse sequence of imagery, as a narrative strategy for giving esthetic pleasure to his ideal reader. The first person singular feels the emotional empathy for the espresso moods of the finer trills which compose the novelistic structure of the branches of plot development: ski hill digressions of prose clarified into crystalline symmetrical design. "Your erotic bedtime stories are written from the Surrealist perspective with the betrothal of the sandy tones of the flesh colored figure reading a novel / mirrored like the wife of Arshile Gorky while the human form is abstracted into the outlines of supple hips beneath the flowing hair of poetic gold... equations of sentence structures multiplied... to be fond of the cuisine... "Her voice is a dreamlike cerulean blue canvas with robin's egg shell tones transforming into ice blue golden sunlight intensifying the cyan regions of brushwork into the psychicspirit * heartflesh * mindframe of the floating islands of desertspace / the ego perceives the desires of the id through the presence of illusory dimensionality creating the portrait of a receptive mood with the essence of northern atmospherics reduced to blue snow illumined by the characterization of ink dark hair flowing into the ivory hands of Joyce Mansour / perfect poise with the contrasting black and white photograph defining the first chair in Surrealist poetics,""The intense purple of the lettering transforms into the four chambered heart / medieval manuscript book-in-a-box intricate design for the reader of the continuous novel which extends to the ancient past crimson heart an indeterminate value blue / red heart that is scarlet with four chambers of blue sky above the yellow flowers with orange centers with faces upturned to the sunlight receptive to the warmth which has evolved into the novel with the blue cover radiating energy a star that emanates character with the Anaïs Nin interpretation of psychological desire / Freudian theory of sexuality suggests a lack of fulfillment for the ego not having realized the perfect relationship / the painter at work on an abstract canvas containing the personal mythology of interconnecting images which describe the erotica of mind in subtle illusory forms," "Looking out on the rings of Saturn which appear as the multiple layers of an agate / the ancient robotic figure appears on the horizon with the circular rings of Saturn appearing as a model with her hair flowing into the subtle vapors of a ship / propulsion is the ultimate in travel from the poetics of Octavio Paz... his life with the wave to the tuxedo figure obscured by the the objects of inner reflection where the solution to identity is found : : the paintings of Albert Gleizes imply a multidimensionality * oxygenorbital * magnetic field with the broad figure in rings of silver metamorphosizing into a circular dish,"
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"A homestead log house critipositioned on a mountain lot would inspire the novelist with a place where the scene of writing can take place / the dwelling place for the soul where the lineage of your innovative novels could find roots / with a high peaked roof and wood burning stove you could work on your next novel...cowgirl gallery penthouse mountain home the old western town with wagon train where the bookstore prevails / the two breasts of the model emerge through the clouds in a Georgia O'Keefe landscape of sandstone * timberspirit * inner self/wigwam as a woman with papoose hikes through the snow towards the Christmas gray tones of the sauna / kiva as the embodiment of the unconscious desire to submerge in the hot tubs lifeforce psyche makeup of the self individuality to become the personification of love...skin complexion in layers of pigmentation in search of the golden fleece the colors of the palette winter golden sunlight blue / got milk in leopard skin sensations of memory the perfect banana in a XXX film in color animated designs of hands reaching outward in the Leonora Carrington margins of shadowed desire intrigued by the charm of the artist / smile whiteness of teeth snow the blankness of the page... magic mushroom wizardry words that enchant the mind with charm of laughter / shaman nightfall with the illusion of surreality lightened into the mind's perceiving self as the fascination with the self-representation of ego / the brilliance of color is the esthetic appreciation for the vivid intensity of sensual perception / a phantasm of the mind with the psychedelic symmetry : : of the page unfolding into the infinite potential of understanding the writing of Timothy Leary fine sse a rt ex pert ise of t he sen ten ce : : a novelistic design... fire as red luminosity ascending the green sloping hills on Pfeiffer Ridge with white dreamlike phantoms transforming into circular smoke rings / near the house where Henry Miller wrote Big Sur and the Oranges of Hieronymus Bosch oxygen cadmium blue the esthetic philosophy of the self in relation to the mountain perspectives... delineated in the ongoing jam that is a first draft of the thoughts on the acid rock that is a form of continuity where the lines trail towards the infinite bass lines that form a counterpoint to the subtle melodic impression of the guitar stylings / the electronic sound pans from one channel to the other as the keyboard player ponders last winter when the snow drifted up near the driveway like a mountain drive through snow crystals / the sounds of Phil Lesh and Friends create the psychedelic precision of the intuitive moment where the narrative coalesces from thought into visuality... Blonde hair descending the pole towards the eroticism of the infinite... A poetic meditation on the stars that is a mini innovative space novel Starlight in Two Million is a novella that represents characterization seeking a larger context within the spacetime continuum for the reader / space oddity who is seeking the enlightenment of a new genre.
David Detrich is a novelist living in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan where he has just completed The Convergence of Two Narrative Lines Ascending, an ultramodern Surrealist novel written in minimal squares. He is the author of Big Sur Marvels & Wondrous Delights (2001) which is available from Amazon. He edits Innovative Fiction Magazine and Surrealist Star Clustered Illuminations.
Aimé and Suzanne Cesaire have written the Surrealist text across the reflective waters of the Caribbean / gray white cloud formations hover above November apple tree branches like brush strokes of entropy... Coffee redraspberry * meta/chocolate tonalities of whipped cream brush strokes /self emerging from aromatic reflections of the prosaic... Lance Olsen
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Intelligent agents of the wild wild west Pop Art... sudden cloudburst of sunrise color as the abstract silkscreen persona known as Hook Paws & Champagne... an easy catch for marriage as the spontaneous deep presence... the remembrance of things past occurs as the November * snowdusted sunrise/golden intensity enumerates the equation... prolepsis: evoking in advance Gérard Genette analepsis; evoking earlier event anachrony: discordance of temporal order Indian tribes feature the papoose with a baby in a leather crib...
like the story of Moses... the Egyptian dynasty design of a bird with outstretched wings... Jacques Derrida considers the themes of ancient Canada... the modern literary press... Garry Thomas Morse reminiscent of the ancient Indian kings to 1200 AD... the Gin Blossoms as the spirit of romance... a tour of ancient world... Dancing under the laser lightshow stars as luminous points in the night sky... suns * planets wandering within the equilibrium of gravity... the naked eye perceives the Milky Way as the stylized stars of the Miro moon symbol silvery shape... the white textures of the performer computer persona constellations * configuration... Surrealist personality reminiscent of the film Robert Desnos poetics... Beat generation themes evolving from Henry Milller /the rebels sing their favorite song just like him: an eternity of donkey * lightwaves inspiration for the conceptual breeding grounds of the creative writing class where Kilowatts of electricity power the electric motor * electromagnetic fields for the radio broadcast... rockstar persona of constellations in a configuration of blonde textures dating the lightwaves in a description of the futuristic ideal celestial body / heavenly heroine * celebrity * superstar Starlight red scarlet * carmine wine red reddish cinammon cherry... King Crimson rose brick literary pink... drawn as a Lance Olsen portrait of light voiced narrative strategies... red hair Oriental rice refried beans Thanksgiving with algebraic equations as the snow crystals blow my mind... December his range of vision spans the scope of the compass sweeping the extent of the colorfield * deskorbit * cloudambiance on the horizon/horse latitudes... the mind has its limits bounds * confines parameters range of mountains peaks in a row... silver chain sierra ridge massive written lines strings series... variations * diversity smoking mixture a collection of memories... array of rice on the stove as pasturage for the prairie grasslands grazing on the land literary greensward... protests in Kiev, Bangkok, and Cairo 2013 as police brutalize and tear gas the peaceful crowds...let us disempower police throughout the world... the quartet is ready to perform after the lockdown... the Pop Art cartoon hero feels love for the translucent silk of ivory curves deep affection * fondness for the moments of tenderness warmth intimacy... an attachment of endearment revealing a literary devotion * noveladoration * idolization of the model text...
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"Love for fashion | | a love for the northern cuisine entitled the poorboy series with an appreciation for the Dry Creek zinfandel to taste the textures to delight in the synonym... The Pop Art cartoon hero feels love for the translucent silk of ivory curves deep affection * fondness for the moments of tenderness in the warmth of the winter intimacy... an attachment of endearment revealing a literary devotion * noveladoration * idolization of the model text...The Pop Art cartoon hero feels love for the translucent silk of ivory curves deep affection * fondness for the moments of tenderness in the warmth of the winter intimacy... an attachment of endearment revealing a literary devotion * noveladoration * idolization of the model text..."Love for fashion : : a love for the translucent silk of ivory curves bent with proclivity felt in the inclination of his desire positioned to reveal a predilection for her penchant earrings.... the northern cuisine entitled the poorboy series... to taste the textures to delight in the synonymous... an appetite enthusiasm * fondness for... a weakness... protests in Kiev, Bangkok, and Cairo 2013... let us defend the rights of the people to gather peacefully... the quartet is ready to perform after the lockdown... love for our fellow human beings... To feel compassion with a regard for the solicitude of the narrator / a concern for the philanthropy and benevolence of our fellow novelists who represent humanity as an expression of the innovative trends in fiction and the contemporary in lifestyle... "Whorls of tassels spurred by the novelist in cowboy shirt who admires the verbal artistry of the flowerchild appearing as a watercolor of yellow white /transparency that appears in a sketch of the Haight Ashbury afternoon sidewalk prowess by adding color to the mindvision * blondecollage * arttechniques that blend the cherry red western shirt with the water soluble cream colors of the model.""Gender / image / text the art of writing is the writing of art with transparent lettering on glass as you ponder the meaning of transparentia rose red intensity of saturated color in conjunction with Venus and the crescent moon above the apple tree in the photogenic clarity of the December winterscape / red hair shades of erotic comedy with red crimson lips and electric blue eye shadows an oil painted complex image that suggests a burlesque drama of expertise while the narrator admires the Frida Kahlo / Diego Rivera deftness in oils a virtuosity in mural painting a mastery of humanity in motion," the XXX sketch of young talent is a parody of the innovative novel with the plotline transforming into phallic silverchrome * starcharts * plot variables in a sequence of mini-erotic escapades that introduce new characters while appreciating the intuitive aptitude of the original lovers.
one : : four
"What is fiction but the realization of the creative process, sculpted and beautified, like the canvas of a painting, visualized scenes which form a tableau, as you chose words which will compose the novelistic space of your mindmap * noveloutline * time/evolving plot structure which forms a recurrent pattern of Matta three dimensional visualizations of intersecting dimensions occuring on the space of the page, a whiteness that is a snowdrift of emotional clarity, a perfect artform for the expression, written or drawn, like a dance of the photogenic model across the pages of the monumental novel in a two volume expression of love by the literary artist for the reader / subject of the composition to appreciate?" the novelist conveys the the esthetic theory of fiction, a lifetime of events in a timelapse sequence of imagery, as a narrative strategy for giving esthetic pleasure to his ideal reader. The first person singular feels the emotional empathy for the espresso moods of the finer trills which compose the novelistic structure of the branches of plot development: ski hill digressions of prose clarified into crystalline symmetrical design. "Your erotic bedtime stories are written from the Surrealist perspective with the betrothal of the sandy tones of the flesh colored figure reading a novel / mirrored like the wife of Arshile Gorky while the human form is abstracted into the outlines of supple hips beneath the flowing hair of poetic gold... equations of sentence structures multiplied... to be fond of the cuisine... "Her voice is a dreamlike cerulean blue canvas with robin's egg shell tones transforming into ice blue golden sunlight intensifying the cyan regions of brushwork into the psychicspirit * heartflesh * mindframe of the floating islands of desertspace / the ego perceives the desires of the id through the presence of illusory dimensionality creating the portrait of a receptive mood with the essence of northern atmospherics reduced to blue snow illumined by the characterization of ink dark hair flowing into the ivory hands of Joyce Mansour / perfect poise with the contrasting black and white photograph defining the first chair in Surrealist poetics,""The intense purple of the lettering transforms into the four chambered heart / medieval manuscript book-in-a-box intricate design for the reader of the continuous novel which extends to the ancient past crimson heart an indeterminate value blue / red heart that is scarlet with four chambers of blue sky above the yellow flowers with orange centers with faces upturned to the sunlight receptive to the warmth which has evolved into the novel with the blue cover radiating energy a star that emanates character with the Anaïs Nin interpretation of psychological desire / Freudian theory of sexuality suggests a lack of fulfillment for the ego not having realized the perfect relationship / the painter at work on an abstract canvas containing the personal mythology of interconnecting images which describe the erotica of mind in subtle illusory forms," "Looking out on the rings of Saturn which appear as the multiple layers of an agate / the ancient robotic figure appears on the horizon with the circular rings of Saturn appearing as a model with her hair flowing into the subtle vapors of a ship / propulsion is the ultimate in travel from the poetics of Octavio Paz... his life with the wave to the tuxedo figure obscured by the the objects of inner reflection where the solution to identity is found : : the paintings of Albert Gleizes imply a multidimensionality * oxygenorbital * magnetic field with the broad figure in rings of silver metamorphosizing into a circular dish,"
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"A homestead log house critipositioned on a mountain lot would inspire the novelist with a place where the scene of writing can take place / the dwelling place for the soul where the lineage of your innovative novels could find roots / with a high peaked roof and wood burning stove you could work on your next novel...cowgirl gallery penthouse mountain home the old western town with wagon train where the bookstore prevails / the two breasts of the model emerge through the clouds in a Georgia O'Keefe landscape of sandstone * timberspirit * inner self/wigwam as a woman with papoose hikes through the snow towards the Christmas gray tones of the sauna / kiva as the embodiment of the unconscious desire to submerge in the hot tubs lifeforce psyche makeup of the self individuality to become the personification of love...skin complexion in layers of pigmentation in search of the golden fleece the colors of the palette winter golden sunlight blue / got milk in leopard skin sensations of memory the perfect banana in a XXX film in color animated designs of hands reaching outward in the Leonora Carrington margins of shadowed desire intrigued by the charm of the artist / smile whiteness of teeth snow the blankness of the page... magic mushroom wizardry words that enchant the mind with charm of laughter / shaman nightfall with the illusion of surreality lightened into the mind's perceiving self as the fascination with the self-representation of ego / the brilliance of color is the esthetic appreciation for the vivid intensity of sensual perception / a phantasm of the mind with the psychedelic symmetry : : of the page unfolding into the infinite potential of understanding the writing of Timothy Leary fine sse a rt ex pert ise of t he sen ten ce : : a novelistic design... fire as red luminosity ascending the green sloping hills on Pfeiffer Ridge with white dreamlike phantoms transforming into circular smoke rings / near the house where Henry Miller wrote Big Sur and the Oranges of Hieronymus Bosch oxygen cadmium blue the esthetic philosophy of the self in relation to the mountain perspectives... delineated in the ongoing jam that is a first draft of the thoughts on the acid rock that is a form of continuity where the lines trail towards the infinite bass lines that form a counterpoint to the subtle melodic impression of the guitar stylings / the electronic sound pans from one channel to the other as the keyboard player ponders last winter when the snow drifted up near the driveway like a mountain drive through snow crystals / the sounds of Phil Lesh and Friends create the psychedelic precision of the intuitive moment where the narrative coalesces from thought into visuality... Blonde hair descending the pole towards the eroticism of the infinite... A poetic meditation on the stars that is a mini innovative space novel Starlight in Two Million is a novella that represents characterization seeking a larger context within the spacetime continuum for the reader / space oddity who is seeking the enlightenment of a new genre.
David Detrich is a novelist living in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan where he has just completed The Convergence of Two Narrative Lines Ascending, an ultramodern Surrealist novel written in minimal squares. He is the author of Big Sur Marvels & Wondrous Delights (2001) which is available from Amazon. He edits Innovative Fiction Magazine and Surrealist Star Clustered Illuminations.
